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Gonna try to do atleast one shot for each theme.  Here are some of the shots I worked on this past week.

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  1. Donald Caron1 June 2018 at 09:24

    These look great Will although they lack some specific elements from the themes. They also need to fit in a 18x24 proportions (portrait format). It would be nice to see them separately and in better resolution (seems to have a lot of details). I don't really understand Escape from Jade Prison, a beautiful but very passive scene with a lot of elements (without the title we can't know what's happening). 21st Vigilante looks awesome, try to frame it in portrait format. Sea Beast is very nice although I find the fishes in front of your creature pretty distracting. It would also be nice to have the hero at the bottom going slightly more in the direction of the beast, or at least have his head turned that way. Bring the whole character into frame, you have enough room. Nice work.

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  2. Wilbert Sweet3 June 2018 at 10:10

    yes sir your your verry right, I could indeed change up the character in jade prision for a more action sequence, and i was thinking of having the crystals in the structure to reflect search lights, throw in some lightening for drama? n yeah ill reformat them towards the end, the vigilante.. was thinking of giving him a crude power weapon, n changing the scene to indoor to match the warehouse. N i can see what you meen by the fish, tho could it balance if I make the creature bigger (the jelly fish is more of a placeholder for form and light for now. N yes ill make that diver cooler xD

    thanks!

    ill post individual shots soon

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